I like the content, straight and fair - but the means of delivery doesn't work for me - far too much background noise!!!It sounds like a traffic island in the middle of a highway!!So, it doesn't sound like a simple, peaceful park at all and the message gets lost in the whoooosh of apparent traffic hurtling past.Sorry, but I do want to be honest about it.keep trying though, I like your styleJohn, York, UKPS: I wonder who this Dr Phil character is??

Thanks for your input John, it's indeed not a large park, but it's got this nice fountain in the center and there is a larger road all too near, but that's something I have tuned out :)I focus on the positive things in the small park. Not all my recordings will be like that, it was just a spur of the moment thought (by the way, here's a good tip, always keep a recorder or notepad with you for moments just like that).I will admit I am not too good at all the editing yet, I am sure I could have cut down some of that extra noise, but I am learning.Dr. Phil is a self-help 'guru' who started out on the Oprah Winfrey show here in the USA and now has his own, very popular show as well as all the other benefits, such as books, etc that come with that.I look forward to your review of my next recording John :)Here's to your success,Xavier